Jorja's Writing

My ride on the rainbow

As the beautiful bright sun was rising in the light blue sky, I flopped in the cart with a big THUMP! The cart was swaying, this way and that way,  this way and that way. It made my tummy rumble like an erupting volcano. The colours were bright and light. My eyes hurt for awhile because, it was so bright.  As soon as I saw how steep it was, my mouth plummeted to the ground like the silver ferns ball trying to get into a hoop. I was so nervous. I felt like I was going to spew on the people behind me . I was shaking and shaking like a christmas tree falling over when Mickey tipped it over.  

Up! Up! Up and AWAY! The brave crew go. The beautiful colours shone onto my warm and smooth back, although, it iswas in the cold thin fluffy air. The cart was as old as a 100 year old man, that nearly  fell into one million pieces. It had old nails holding the wood together. They were very loose. Luckily there was a builder on the cart and he had better nails so he put those brand new shiney stiff nails in. I was sitting in the cart meanwhile it floated through the air with 7 other people in the rickety old cart. I heard lots of screaming and smelt lots of vegetables mashed up but not nice smelling  and we heard “Is there a bathroom here.?” The colours was were as beautiful as my jewelry. It had 6 colours that were shining onto the old cart to make it look like a brand new one. We were already half way up the rainbow meanwhile the back of the cart was only ¼  one quarter up the rainbow. I bit my nails until they were all gone completely

. AHHH!AHHH! Everyone was shouting at the top of their lungs going down the rainbow as fast as a cheetah in a race. I felt like I was going to spew, (luckily I didn’t.) When we reached the bottom lots of people sprinted to the bathroom and yelled “Oh my tummy!”