Tuesday, 10 November 2015

Sam's Writing


Ka boom! The volcano erupted and the explosion went 1000 usefull miles wide. There were lava puddles everywhere. The  steaming  hot  lava  was as bright as 100 torchers gleaming on the same  place. The volcano was very unpredictable when it  erupted.  It  looked like  it was  spewing out demolishing  lava. The crater was getting drenched because it was  in  the  way.  It was  midnight,  although  it  looked  like  fireworks  brightening  the sky.  The  deadly  smoke  was  slowly  drifting  across  the  gloomy  sky.  A  few  hours  after  that  it  did  not  look  as  magnificent  as  it  once  had.   The  lava  got  past   everything  in  its  tracks.  The  steep  rocky  volcano  was shaking  like crazy.  Unlucky  trees  got  were destroyed  as  fast  as  a  bowling  ball  smacking  over  white  bowling  pins.  I  am  glad  I  wasn't  there  when  it  erupted.          

2 comments:

  1. good peace of writing sam from xhan

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  2. Amazing writing Sam I loved how you described your story.By JACK.RM14

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