Samuel's Writing

One day there was a grey and blue jet zooming in the air. The   jet was doing aerobatics in the air and I thought I want to have a go in the jet while it is in the  white and blue air. But I couldn`t have a go because I was not old enough. I saw the jet doing backflips, twisting and turning. After that I saw it getting lower and lower down but it turned while it was falling. In the last minute he pulled up so hard and it was so strong that he flew out of control. It was scary like a hand following you. The gas was flowing out of the tip of the wide wings. It made a long line unfortunately  it faded away very slowly.The fumas blended in the white clouds.

The strong jet flew past the crowd and showed its sharp tail. The crowed went wild when the flaming jet went flashing past. The jet went up and up until you couldn't see the jet . Suddenly the jet was tumbling down and spinning and spinning through the air. Wow! everyone thought that was so cool. He hit his head while driving the aircraft We thought that he was on conchis but suddenly the jet pulled up. phew! people were rubbing their heads because they thought that the man was on conchis.

The jet was getting closer to the ground and the crowed thought that the jet was coming closer to the ground.The jets wheels came out of the stomach of the jet. Everyone sprinted over to the jet but they got too close that they hurt there ears. The jet landed and the tyres squeked as the wheels touched the runway.After he landed the plane I saw him jumping up and down until he stepped out of the jets.