Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Jorjah's Prove It


Oh! We’re nearly at the front. The carpet is so red it is like blood. All of the people were shouting my ears nearly fell off. Even some people were wearing wigs that are so blond and flowing to try and look like Taylor Swift. There were security standing by the autograph table their mussels are so big they could lift mount everest with one arm. “We only have one more person then we are at the front.” I squealed. Her hair was as shiny as the sun. She gave me a nice big hug. I was crying hard because I actually met Taylor Swift. She gave me lots of autographs for my friends although I only asked for one. Taylor Swift was really nice giving me lots of autographs.

2 comments:

  1. good adjectives. Keep it up. by Justin

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  2. Great adjectives Jorja. Next time try to use some onoatopoeia.By Krishna

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