Thursday, 15 October 2015

Jorja's Prove It Writing


WALT:I will prove that I can use complex conjunctions.


WHISTLE! The ball frantically nearly got into my hands although my Mum did a interstep. “Please don’t go hard on me Mum.” I begged. I tried to get in front of my buddy but she kept moving in front of ME! My heart was beating like a volcano trying to explode everywhere. “No wrong you can’t be 6 feet away so sand beside,” yelled mrs mitchell,although you had to be 3 feet away. The other team got a goal meanwhile I shrugged my shoulders. “Ok time for presentation.” said Mrs Williams. DPS has to come up we all get a participation certificate we all come up with gleer in our eyes meanwhile all the other people steared at us. The most improved is….. Libby Morrice .Most improved player is Jorja Southon and Miriama Stevens. “Jorja it is time for your speepch.I have done my speech so here is your gift it is a jug,candel holders and some chocolate meanwhile other coaches are opening their presents.

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