Thursday, 15 October 2015

Jaida's Free Writing


West Edmonton Malls Water Park Plan, Canada




Yay! It was the day when we went to West Edmonton Mall at their water park. There were many different kinds of water slides at the water park. There was the worm slide that was squigly like a worm, a drop down slide when the floor  just drops and you go straight down, a dark slide when it is pitch black, a family slide when your whole family can go down at once and there was a main pool that was like the beach because it had waves that were runned by electricity.

I was staring hard out at the different kinds of water slides trying to choose what one to go on first meanwhile my sister raced ahead and jumped on the worm slide to have a turn so I did the same and raced ahead but I jumped in the main pool and tried to surf the waves but sadly I didn’t. Weee! Ahhh! I went on the pitch black  water slide it was scary although I didn’t scream in the water slide. The next water slide I went on was the worm slide it was purple and squigly like a worm I nearly fell off when it came to the bump in the middle. It was slippery but fun because it goes faster when it is slippery. The last slide I went on was the family slide I went on it with my family everyone had to sit on this biscuit shaped thing and we go down the wide water slide.

After that we all dried off and got our clothes back on  because it was lunch time we went to the cafe at the waterpark for lunch. It was yum for lunch I had a custard square cake and I had a chocolate milkshake my lunch was delicious and so was my familys. After we had lunch we hopped in my nana’s and papa's car and we drove back home to my nana’s and my poppa’s house on the drive home I watched a movie in there car.

THE END!

1 comment:

  1. nice work jadia I like your begning middle and end.kelly

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