David's Prove It Writing

Walt=  I will prove that I can make writing interesting by using a mixture of simple and compound sentences.

Amazon adventure!

The sun speckled light through the dense Amazon jungle. The air was filled with damp moisture and the sound of birds chattering in the treetops.

‘The jungle looks spectacular.’ whispered Lennox. ‘Those trees look magnificent!’ exclaimed Liam. ‘Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh!’ whispered Lennox. ‘We don’t want to wake the poisonous spiders. Let’s get in the canoe, we are going to catch an Arapaima.’. While they were paddling, a storm with lightning arose. ‘We better avoid the lightning okay.’ said Liam. Soon they saw water bubbling on the surface of the river.’It's an arapaima!’

Wow it”s big! Said lennox. They lowered the strong net down into the cold river.

Suddenly the arapaima thrashed in the water. SHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!  

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