I will prove to use thoughts and feelings
Miniball
As I went in the pools it packed with people that are playing miniball. I got scared because I thought that we were playing right as I came in. I felt my tummy grumbleing like I was scared that I might not be going on to play.
When I saw my team practising for the big game, I felt so happy that I was not late. I happily walked over and joined in with my team. When I got the ball, I bounced the ball and then took a shot at the hoop.I thought “who are we facing tonight” Sam said “we are facing the dps lakers
i like how you used feelings maybe you could use more thoughts.desiree
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