WALT: I will prove that I can use complex conjunctions in my writing
“Don’t look down!” The rollercoaster man exclaimed. SQUEEK! Went the handle as the man pulled it. We slowly traveled up the hill meanwhile the people behind us screamed their heads off. I thought to myself this will be a nice cruisy ride. UNTIL… We stopped at the top and went flying down the hill at one million miles an hour. Will I fall out of the carriage? I wondered to myself. I started feeling sick. We finally came to a stop. When I stood up there was a yellow patch on the seat, hopefully no one will sit on that seat again!!!
THE END!!!
I like the way you re-read and thought about your sentence by Desiree.
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