Wednesday, 13 May 2015

Kaitlyn's Camp Anderson Writing

In writing I was trying to add detail and interest the read. I can add detail about what I see, hear and feel. 
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  1. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 15:56

    Great writing Kaitlyn just use a dictionary next time.roina

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  2. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 15:58

    great similes from kelly

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  3. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 15:59

    Good work from Darcey

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  4. Anonymous18 June 2015 at 23:07

    great kaitlyn from kelly

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  5. Anonymous23 June 2015 at 00:10

    great story it really hooked me in,shay

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  6. Anonymous26 June 2015 at 14:21

    Your writing really hocked me in I could tell that you were on a motor bike.
    I really liked your show not tell!Jorja

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  7. Anonymous19 November 2015 at 14:46

    Amazing story.By Alexi and Quinn

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