Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Character Portrait

My Dad

My dad is medium height with a short beard. He has black curly hair like a wrinkled balloon. Dad has 5 tattoos an arm sleeve, Black Panther, an eagle, a heart over his heart and my name SHAY!

My dad is strong because he has a big lump of muscle on his bicep. My dad is fun because we go on motorbike rides. My dad tells funny jokes and makes me laugh. He can fix anything if he puts his mind to it.

When my dad picks me up on the weekend from mums he says, “How was your week?”

Shay Year 4


4 comments:

  1. Great pece of writing Shay I like how you used adjectives. Kaitlyn

    ReplyDelete
  2. great work shay in descriving your dad

    ReplyDelete
  3. Nice job on your writing Shay, awesome use of adjectives!!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Great adjectives. Justin

    ReplyDelete